The Bartered Bride: A review (Plus giveaway)

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Today, we have a new book from Lena Goldfinch! In this blog post, you will find a review of The Bartered Bride, an excerpt, and a giveaway. Enjoy!

About the Book

The-Bartered-BrideJem Wheeler has always been a survivor. He just wants to make a fresh start in Colorado Springs after the loss of his wife. But then he happens upon a young mute woman being sold off to the highest bidder. He wasn’t looking for a mail-order bride. He wasn’t looking to rescue anyone either. But desperate circumstances can drive a good man to do things he hadn’t planned on doing…

When Jem steps into Annie’s life, she’s not expecting anyone to save her. Mute from birth, she’s just using all her wits to survive. All she’s ever really wanted is a family of her own. For someone to see her. To look at her long enough to hear the things she can’t say.

Can a rescued bride who can’t speak communicate her love for a grieving widower and his little girl? Will her love ever be returned?

The Brides Series #3

Note: Each book in The Brides Series can be read as a stand-alone novel, but reading in order will provide a more complete reading experience.



When I first got the email asking for reviews of this book, I was excited because I love reading about mute characters. Lena Goldfinch didn’t disappoint.



I really liked the humanness of Jem. He was far from perfect, but he usually did the right thing once he realized what was happening. And Annie was sweet. How she tried to help as much as she could, how she loved Mae, how she gave Jem his space when he needed it.



There was never any point where I thought the dialogue deviated from what it should have been from a historical standpoint or from the characters.



The plot was excellent and well-executed. There was nothing that seemed off in any way and the story was historically accurate.

Overall writing quality:


The writing was done well. Lena kept the story moving along, but not too fast.



It was hard to put this book down. I wanted to find out what happened to everybody! 😀



Whether you like mail order bride stories, clean romance, or unique books, this is a book for you.

Note: I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.



Jem took the apple core from his daughter and passed her one of the remaining crackers with a piece of cheese on it. Mae munched that down and looked to him immediately for another, the last one.

He gave it to her, then showed her his empty hands.

She frowned. “More?”

“No more,” Jem said, and showed her his empty hands again, making a bigger gesture out of it, as if the little girl was accusing him of hiding some.

If Annie weren’t so intent on eating her share of cheese and crackers she might have smiled at the sight of them, one of the most dangerous men she’d ever seen sitting side by side with that tiny little girl. They made quite a mismatched pair.

Mae looked over at Annie, at the last cracker in her hand and the last bit of cheese.

Annie gulped down the mouthful she was chewing. She looked down at the last of her meal and back at the little girl. To her shame, she didn’t want to give up her last cracker. She could barely remember the last meal she’d eaten.

“That’s Annie’s food,” Jem admonished the little girl. “You’ve had yours.”

Mae bit her lip. She glanced down at her lap, then back at Annie again.

I can share, Annie attempted to tell Mae with her eyes alone. She snapped her cracker in half—simply unable to bear parting with the whole thing—and passed it across to the little girl. Mae took it and popped the whole thing in her mouth, making Annie smile.

“Mae!” her father said.

She looked at him wide-eyed, her mouth full of cracker. “Whaf dafdda?” she said, muffled, spraying a few cracker crumbs onto his trousers.

He closed his eyes briefly and brushed them off. “You didn’t have to give her any,” he said to Annie, “but thanks.”

Annie grunted, her way of saying she didn’t mind that much. She looked down quickly and finished her last bit of food. The crackers had been crispy and the cheese silky and smooth. They’d tasted like heaven.

“You must be thirsty,” he said. “Do you mind sharing?”

She shook her head and automatically lifted two fingers.

“Two’s no?” he asked.

She nodded, pleased, and lifted one finger. She’d grown up sending signals through the floor of the Ruskins’ house, one stomp for yes, two for no. It came natural as rain now.

“And one’s yes,” he said, catching on quick.

Annie drank deep when he passed her the flask of water, amazed he’d let her drink from it. She tried her best to pour it down her throat without touching her lips to the flask, so he wouldn’t regret giving it to someone so dirty. She wished she could tell him thanks, but after Mae had her fill and he took his own swallow, he was back under his hat, likely going over the events of the day.

How he’d stuck himself with her.

How he probably regretted even stepping off the train at the last stop.

She couldn’t say she blamed him.

She hadn’t much wanted to marry a stranger herself.



THE BARTERED BRIDE (Kindle) (Nook) (Kobo) (iTunes/iBooks)

THE UNEXPECTED BRIDE (Kindle) (Nook) (iTunes/iBooks) (Kobo)

SLEIGH BELLS & MISTLETOE (Kindle) (Nook) (iTunes/iBooks) (Kobo)


About the Author

Lena GoldfinchLENA GOLDFINCH writes sweet Historical Western Romance / Inspirational Romance and books for teens. She’s always been a sucker for a good old-fashioned romance, whether it’s a novel or short story, young adult or adult, fantasy or realistic, contemporary or historical. Lena has been a finalist in several national writing contests, including the RWA Golden Heart and ACFW Genesis contests. She enjoys life in a quiet, small town with her husband, two kids, and two very spoiled Black Labs.



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6 thoughts on “The Bartered Bride: A review (Plus giveaway)

  1. Thanks so much for your sweet review, Faith, and for sharing the news of my new release! So glad your enjoyed Jem and Annie’s story. 🙂

    Wishing you a very Merry Christmas!

  2. Raechel says:

    This book sounds very good! I’ll definitely have to check this series out 🙂

  3. Shantelle says:

    This is a really cute series! I just like sweet, touching romances in and of themselves! I’m a hopeless romantic sometimes! 😉 Marriages of convenience are always interesting too … watching them slowly fall in love when they think they never will.


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